Gabe

Writing was fairly tame; some pizzazz in the lexicon would also be greatly appreciated. Plot-wise, it was alright. There were a few surprises that I didn't anticipate. However, (I hate to sound like a prick for complaining about this but) I wish there were a bit more variety in Gabe and Jennifer's relationship. I'm not saying that I want more leeching banshees to stick to Gabe and whatnot. I just got tired of how they seemed to come together for some sex, contentment, and gratitude at the end of more than a few chapters. Those actions, in themselves, are definitely not bad things. But describing that same scene in a different way would be nice after it's been repeated about five times.

Although, having Maryann Jordan dangle a tantalizing love-triangle prospect in a future book certainly got my engine revving. Maybe there's hope yet...