Girl A

In somewhat of a rare occurrence, the writing was a bit of struggle here. While the story (despite it being dark and disturbing) had a decent enough premise, the telling felt disjointed, choppy, and a bit all over the place- sometimes taking paragraphs to realize you've jumped time lines or characters. Interestingly, there was very little exploration of ‘the why' behind these events and that could've made for the most intriguing part, as the event that set the story in motion was used as nothing more than a storytelling device to fill in only some of the backstory.