Greenblood
2022

Ratings2

Average rating3.5

15

This book needed a few more rounds of editing. There's repetitive phrasing and repetitive information throughout. The worst offender is an early scene involving Sylph and Wisp, whose names are similar enough the author uses the wrong one several times.

After unofficially teaming up for the solo tournament, Damian and Sylph are now joined at the hip 90% of the time. Every student gets one more class, which they have separately, but those scenes are brief. The other dorm mates fall into the background beyond a few sparring sessions.

Action scenes are cool, developing spells is cool, finally seeing some quests is cool. I'm just disappointed by the execution.

October 11, 2023Report this review