I Hunt Killers

Look, I have thoughts on this book that I NEED to share. Basically, I think the idea and story and the plot of this book is absolutely fantastic. But, the thing is, the writing is absolutely TERRIBLE. I hate to say it, but sounds like my own writing form when I was eleven; all tell and no show, awkward 3rd person present tense, and overall just sounding like an amateur writer. I feel like this would be a great book if it were written by someone else.