Love Among the Stars

Needs lots of work

The premise is solid. The journey isn't too bad. It has lots of humor. The ending needs to be reworked. Jemma responds to every date like an animal in mating season so it's kind of hard to believe she has been in love with Eve since they met.

Then there are the huge amounts of grammatical and spelling errors. I don't think anyone did any editing on this book. My recommendation would be to look at every quotation mark because almost all of them are done incorrectly. Then I could suggest reading the story out loud.