Lovely

This was a free e-book at BN.com so I figured “what the hay, I'll check it out”. It's a self-published work by this author. Although the topic was interesting (being able to repeat one particular day in your life in the hopes of correcting it), I found the story itself pretty depressing. It seemed that the chapters jumped around a lot, and there were several times where I wasn't quite sure how the story got from one place to another. I rarely make comments about grammar and punctuation, but the lack of proofreading and editing did interfere in a smooth reading experience. There were several places where sentences did not make sense and I had to mentally add a word (or two) to make it sound right in my head.

I do think this author should continue her writing. According to the “about the author” info at the end of the story, she's currently in college. This story has a lot of promise and would greatly benefit from proofreading and editing. Since she's at college, I'm sure there's an English professor or two who might be willing to assist with the editing process.