My Brother's Teammates

Okay, there were some damn good lines in here and some conversations had me rolling in laughter because they are absolutely ridiculous, but with their ages it makes sense.
Pacing was mostly alright, but I thought they got to love real quick, especially when they'd never been on a date or hung out much besides sexual encounters.
The writing... great potential here. It is a bit rough, though. Not rough draft rough but... hmmm maybe the version before an ARC? Like, there are a few spelling errors, a few grammatical errors or missing words, and some timeline inconsistencies (Her brother is 2 years older than her, then 1, but he's a senior and she is a junior... maybe because I think her graduating was also brought up). Also, how does she not know anything about football when her dad played it in college and her brother has been playing it through high school and now college?

I had to stop thinking so hard about how things didn't make sense and just went with the vibes. The vibes? The sweetest, the humor, the sass – all on point. So, 3.5 stars for entertainment value, but rounded down to 3 because I wasn't a fan of the cheesiness of the ending and my eyes rolled during the epilogues.
Will definitely recommend this in the future when people are looking for sweet sports books.