My Sister April

I didn't enjoy this story as much as the other readers on here. I read a few of the reviews that mentioned it was “really dark and disturbing,” but I guess I missed something? I guessed the ending of the story right off the bat. Characters, plot, and overall backstory could be developed more but I understand this is a short story.

I didn't find any elements of the story to be horrifying. I wanted more horror, shock, disgust etc...

Although the author's intentions were there, the story fell short with me on readability. It switched from past tense, to present tense to future tense. It was sort of everywhere for me.

I think with time, revision and practice Kyra will be an excellent storyteller, but this one missed the mark for me.