Nodus Tollens

I'm DNF-ing this book. I'm usually on board for a hockey romance. However, this needs to be heavily edited. The concept could be successful but I couldn't even make it to the actual plot because the grammar and word usage was so terrible. The tense the author was writing in was constantly changing, even from one sentence to the next. If you do want to go into this book for the plot, just be prepared. I'm sure the story itself is great. I wish I could have made it through.