Of the Clouds

I have mixed feelings about this story. The cons: I found it unbelievable that a large basket would fit through the crack but a petite woman wouldn't; it was too convenient that the shaman only taught her two new spells, and one of them just happened to be the one that would save her; and the prince put off saving her to go get help (logical), then came back with only the one guard he'd had before. The pros: it was well-written, easy to read, had a non-medieval-Europe setting, had a better excuse for the Rapunzel elements than the original, and did NOT suffer from insta-love.