Overhaul

This cover is bomb diggity! Great representation of the hero. Great composition. Interesting typography.

Unfortunately, I am giving up on this one at 50% The writing just isn't working for me. These two sound like teenagers instead of grown adults. All the “girlfriend” and “boyfriend” talk drove me nuts. This is an ex-military biker dude for Christ sake!

“I thought I was buying lunch,” she protested as I got my wallet out. “What the hell kind of boyfriend do I look like?” I put one of the hundreds that Jimmy gave me earlier into the little book. “Already said I wasn't going to take advantage of you then dump you. That shit starts now, darling.” She flushed, “Does that mean you're my boyfriend now?”