Paradise Falls

Great concept for a story line

I enjoyed the story, but the descriptions were so in depth that they took away from the story so I would skim them. The plot was excellent, but the timeline was off. She was 26, a teacher for 4 years, and had taught while he was there plus he was held captive for 2 years and went to school to become a teacher... I would suggest she take another look at some grammar errors. Silly things that can be easily missed like hand supposed to be hang and double words. A LOT OF DUPLICATE WORDS. It was worse towards the end like whoever was checking it over got lazy. I didn't take stars off for that, but I admit it got annoying. I only gave it 3 stars because of the timeline issues, some of the story points that were incredibly confusing and the overly descriptive areas. I liked it though...