Psycho

I'm really mad about this book. The writing and editing are extremely poor and it almost made me DNF. I pushed through because I already made it this far but I was angry about it.

All of the books have typos. This one was just off the hook. Not just typos, but whole sentences repeated back to back like they rewrote the sentence but forgot to delete the old one. Or half a sentence that was deleted and rewrote but repeated exactly what the beginning of the sentence said and really makes the whole sentence so confusing that you make up your own instead so it can make sense to you.

Some parts of the POV are written as a 3rd person but they are talking about themselves (ex: she looked at his eyes and then to my lips - when it should have said MY eyes and then to my lips).

It feels like the characters are in different spots from where they were described to have been. By the time a spicy scene is over, I'm convinced they are just twisted into pretzels because of the way it's written.

I'll finish the series because of the commitment I've already made, but at this point I don't even want to.