Stars of Fortune
2015 • 337 pages

Ratings13

Average rating3.2

15

I wasn't into the writing style, especially the overdramatic drop of pronouns: “Stopped what she was doing, heard a rustle.” (quoted almost verbatim from the book)

I didn't feel invested in any of the characters, especially not whiny Sasha or Bran “Mary Sue” Killian. Plus, I didn't understand why she got all pissed at him for not having told her he was a wizard, cos I mean, didn't she dream of him and his lightning bolts? You'd have thought that she'd be the least surprised member of the party. In one chapter, the actual “strategising” on how they were going to search for the fallen stars was relegated to a cursory single short paragraph: “They spent one hour strategising...” (Not quoting verbatim here because I'm too lazy to find the actual quote in the book, but that was the gist) The rest of the chapter is dedicated to Sasha and Bran getting to know each other in a romantic walk on the beach. Gee.

The last straw came after a short dialogue between Riley and Sasha when Sasha asks Riley to teach her “how to fight”.

“Okay, see, you're punching like a girl.”“I am a girl.”“Nobody's a girl in a fight. You're a fighter. ...”

These are two women, by the way.

DNF.

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