Swann's Revenge

Swann's Revenge

2018 • 224 pages

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15

While for the most part the story was light and sweet, there is a problem I had. Dan constantly says/thinks that he's being patient, waiting for Graham to want to have sex with him. In one chapter Dan thinks something along the lines of ‘the next step is Graham's' - which was something I liked and appreciated. But then the very next chapter, they have a conversation that leads to sex. And, honestly, I felt that NOTHING about that conversation indicated Graham was ready/wanting sex. More than anything, it felt like the author was given until a certain page in the book to get the guys in bed together and she suddenly realized that she hadn't gotten them there yet so, let's just shoehorn it in.

December 2, 2018Report this review