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The Billionaire's Marriage Pact

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15

The characters' reasons for not getting together were somewhat believable, so I'll let it keep 3 stars. But nothing was outstanding, and there were a lot of annoying editing goofs. I'm not talking about simple typos, which I understand and don't usually comment on, but commas in the wrong place (not “you shouldn't use a comma here,” but “um, it belongs two words over instead of in the middle of the phrase”) and sentences where the author obviously rewrote it to sound better but didn't get all of the old words deleted.

June 30, 2022Report this review