The Cartographer's Vault: Book 1

The Cartographer's Vault: Book 1

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15

DNF. An intriguing premise, however this feels very self-published. A session with a good editor would transform this from a nice idea to a solid book. As it stands, the prose is often torturous, so much so that I was frequently being thrown out of the story. I am at a loss to understand the number of 5 star reviews, however I guess some people have a higher tolerance for unpolished writing. There may well be a great story in here, but the entry barrier was too high for me. A generous 3 stars, since I feel there is something interesting here, it is just unfortunate that I couldn't discover it.

November 10, 2023Report this review