The Debt of Time

The writing is good which is the only thing I can praise this fic for. It's WAAAAAAY too long with too many unnecessary dialogues/details (it should be trimmed down to 1/3 of its length), the time travel aspect makes no sense to me, and Mia is more like a super annoying Mary Sue OC than Hermione.

The Mia/Remus and pack bond part should be removed completely since they are just page fillers (a long one at that!) and do not contribute to the main plot of the story, that is, the soul bond between Mia and Sirius.

Gave up reading near the end of part 3.