The Ex Games

I'm embarrassed I read these 3 novellas. Not because of the sex parts, but just because of how craptastic everything was. I mean, bad. Really really bad. I literally said, “what the actual fuck?!” every few pages. This should have been put on Literotica and left there.

I know what it's like to be conflicted over someone. I get it! But good Lord, Katie had multiple personalities to the Nth degree. She flip flops multiple times on the same damn page. “I love him because... PENIS! I hate him... sort of.” Brandon is a creepy domineering asshole. I wanted to punch him in the face so much. Of course this story makes it ok though, because he's rich and hot and he had... reasons. Douchenozzle deserved a restraining order and a swift kick in the nuts at the least.

Author(s), if you want to publish a sexual fantasy of yours then that's totally great. But you have to flesh out an actual story, not just awkwardly force a plot along to get to yet another not-so-fantastic sex scene. I don't know anyone who orgasms at the drop of a hat. If you can insta-cum the second someone puts a finger in you then you're the exception, not the rule. Also, people can and do say no to sex, even when it's with someone they love.