The Hook Up

I have to dissent to the glowing reviews of this book. While it's generally well written (not riddled with errors, etc.), the story just didn't work for me.

I have no problem with insta-love stories, but from the get go this couple's luv was just too much.He gasped in class when he saw her for the first time. He could always tell when she was near. Their first two hook-ups were in public because they just could not stop themselves (though we learn this is completely out of character for both characters as we get to know them). Despite the obvious insta-love, the characters don't really communicate well, leading to the inevitable miscommunication then wedge between the couple to reach the HEA.I understand where the author wanted to take me, but I just couldn't buy in. I think for me, if you're going to do this kind of meant for each other insta-love story, there almost has to be acknowledgement of otherworldly forces--fate, kismet, whatever--pushing--no demanding--this couple, who really don't have a lot in common except for intelligence and witty banter, to be together. (See Bet Me by Jennifer Crusie).