The Peace of Freysdal

I've been reading this for months now and I haven't even gotten to page 100.

This feels like it was published a tad too early. The writing is super clunky and telling there's no emotional connection and I have no care about the characters or the world. The pacing is super off scenes often rushed which makes them clunky.
I feel super bad as I got an arc from the author and I want to support indie authors but this just didn't work for me.

If you can get past the writing I feel the story could really be good.