The Primrose Garden

Firstly, a required disclaimer: I received a copy of this book through a Goodreads giveaway.


This book had the potential to be a good one but it is unfortunately riddled with grammatical mistakes as well as inconsistencies. For example in chapter 11 Olivia calls Anna by the wrong name (her own name actually), then in chapter 12 Dan picks up the phone and suddenly he changes into Joe. Who is Joe and what happened to Dan? I'm also pretty sure the author just straight up forgot that they had a cat because it is never mentioned again after being named.
The story itself is a nice one, although the main characters do nothing to move the plot. It's more like the story is just happening around them while they drink coffee and have stilted chats that honestly sound like aliens trying to simulate human conversation while waiting for someone to call them to tell them the next plot point.