The Repayment: A horror novella

The Repayment was a very short read and it really needed to be longer or edited better. This one managed to be both too much and not enough at the same time. We got too much about a character that turned out to be inconsequential and not enough about the one that did. The ending was utterly rushed and unsatisfying.

Ultimately, I thought that the idea was interesting but that the execution lacked refinement.
Neutral 2.5 rounded up.