The Sound of Stars

So this book has a cool premise and some nice representation but sadly lacks in all other aspects.
There is almost no world building. The aliens don't make sense, they exist merely to turn this cheesy love story into a “star-crossed” one.
The romance is not developed at all. We're told the protagonists are suddenly in love and from that moment on, they don't let us forget. Dramatic declarations of undying love ensue, without any real basis in reality.
The plot is repetitive and boring. Everything happens only for the sake of the romance. Get into trouble, get saved from trouble (usually by a convenient third party), drive around and talk about books...
Oh and about that. What self-respecting lover of literature would prefer just SUMMING UP some of the best books to someone instead of making them read and experience them themselves????? Like sure, I'll just tell you Jane Eyre in a few hours, it's not like you're missing anything.
Add to that a very silly deus ex machina ending, Ellie's conveniently out of the way parents, her suddenly forgotten best friend and you have a book that's an utterly forgettable, incoherent cheesy trope-fest.

This is a first draft, a collection of ideas. Sadly, unlike the ones it mentions and quotes from, this is not a good novel.