The Vanishing Game

The Vanishing Game

2014

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15

This story is actually an advertisement for a car company. I'm not joking. I found it odd that the name of the vehicle was used dozens of times throughout the story instead of referring to it was “the car”, but now it makes sense.

The story is weak, the main character is boring and unlikeable, and the dialogue is unnatural. I lost my interest halfway through and never found it again.

Also, I listed to the audio version available on Audible. The narrator sounds as if he's trying to seduce the listener the entire time. It's annoying.

Everything about this is bad and should be avoided.

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