Timeborne
344 pages

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RS_Aris
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I had such high hopes...

Let me start by saying I read and listened to this book. I wanted to like it, but it is trying entirely too hard. The writing style seems to be all over, the dialogue was kind of cringy jumping from one extreme of a Lara Croft type FMC character to a love sick heroine calling the MMC “baby.” The spice? About as spicy as mayo. At one point I actually realized I rolled my eyes as our FMC is saying she is barely familiar with Aramaic and then in the next sentence has miraculously translated an entire paragraph of scripture she didn't know and also miraculously just remembered perfectly. This story had a lot of build up for what seemed to be a rushed delivery to end on a cliffhanger.

July 6, 2024Report this review