Titanic
Titanic
Could have been better
I learned a few things from this book and found it a good read overall. I do think it could have been written much better though.
Not sure what the original form was, but “the above” was used throughout as a reference to things mentioned earlier in the book. Parentheses were used extensively; most of them could have been their own sentences. There was conjecture at times - what people might have been thinking or feeling rather than discussing facts. I do think the passengers section went into too much detail while glossing over other areas - the inquiries were only briefly mentioned.