Triad's Curse

I do have some minor complaints. Firstly, the writing was a little juvenile and there were some grammar mistakes, nothing too bad but noticeable. And secondly, I found the characters to be quite childish, especially Tallis. Ages weren't discussed if i'm remembering correctly, but it honestly felt like they were all 16.

Besides that though, I think Pierce has an interesting story on her hands, with a little more fine tuning I think it'd have great potential!