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Trouble

Trouble



This one was just OK for me. It had the bones to ba a really good story and I see the potential in this author. But this one was a bit all over the place for me. The hero starts out as one thing and then morphs into a completely different guy halfway through the book. The guy he becomes is actually the WAY more interesting persona and I wish he had been THAT guy through the entirety of the book.

My other issue was I just didn't feel a connection between Chase or Sophia. One, Sophia was a bit of a bitch IMO and I wanted to throat punch her throughout the book. On top of that these two really don't spend a lot of time together, so the “I love yous” were a bit hard to comprehend.

There were also a few “personal pet peeves” things going on for me. One...the cover didn't match the hero AT ALL (no tats or piercings mentioned). As well as their names being mentioned WAY too many times throughout the book (CHASE - 446 times and SOPHIA - 400 times) according to my e-reader search function. It really started to distract me as the book went on.

Like I said, the bones were definitely there so I would be willing to give this author another try.



February 3, 2017Report this review