Uncovering Lily
2018 • 170 pages

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15



This book wasn't bad per se, I have certainly read worse. That said, the entire plot and execution were just bizarre to me. Like the hero knows who Lily is, that she has been kidnapped and is being held against her will and instead of telling her who he is and that he is planning on getting her out safely, or I don't know, trying to work together to come up with a plan. He decides that fingering her and having sex with her is a good way of earning her trust?? The hero was also flying off the handle over stupid shit like the heroine lying and saying she liked a milkshake that was horrid because there was no place for lies in their relationship. First, what relationship? She thinks he is a douche that bought her for the night. Second, he is keeping the fact he knows her and knows she is being held against her will a secret. A lie of omission is still a LIE.





Also, how many baths/showers does one couple need? They shower, then they take a bath, then they shower again, then they take another bath. All in the span of a couple of hours? Then they shower yet AGAIN in the morning! lol

So yea, it was OK. I think it could have been better had the story been more fleshed out and maybe taken place over a more extended period. The characters needed more development. The plot required more development. That said, the sex scenes were fairly hot and plentiful. And even though I thought Finn was a little on the bipolar side, I did like his over the top alpha side. This ends on a cliffy, and I am not sure if I will bother with the next book or not. Part of me wants to see how this all ends...so I guess we will see.




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