Vinegar Hill

I thought the writing style was effective - the present to past tense, intrusive memories. I felt it fit the situation of the main character well, her depression with her past/present and her anxiety and hopelessness about her future. There were some great moments of characterization, but there were some subplots that weren't complete enough for me. Also, I thought the ending was abrupt. I needed more “closure,” maybe? I just thought it ended too quickly.