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When the World Ends

When the World Ends: The Beginning

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I was given a copy by the author in exchange for an honest review

I enjoyed this book. The sex scenes were really hot, and playful and respectful. There was a lot of love and understanding. It had this Hippie Free-Love vibe too it, which was fun and I hadn't encountered that before in my erotica reads. Also, a guy gives a chick oral and his tongue is pierced. That is always fun. Also, sleep-groping.

However, what initially drew me to this story was the premise. The world is a zombie infested nightmare and three survivors are trapped together. Unfortunately the story barely touches on that. The zombies could have been anything: A mudslide, a blizzard. If you're going to select an unrealistic premise, no matter what you write, erotica or not, commit to it. We're writers, we can write anything! Indulge!

For example, Isadora is married to Jacob but their best friend Samuel is also living with them because zombies. Sometimes the horde moves on and the survivors can do things like collect river water and firewood. Maybe Sam went out to hunt or something and almost gets bit, there's a scare, and it helps Issy and Sam realize how much they want each other and should take advantage of the time they have together and that sparks all the wild threesome sex.

It was good, I liked it, but I see potential for more which I hope the author will take advantage of.

January 11, 2016Report this review