Xanterie

Minor spoiler warning: I only got 29% into this before giving up. The sex scenes were not written that well. Despite her pleasure, the first two sessions were him taking her without consent and she basically accepts it. The third one just had me groaning in annoyance. Outside of the sex scenes, him mentally going on and on about his previous live was too frequent and his alpha Tarzan routine was too clichéd. The rest that I had read in that 29% had promise but needs refining due to wordiness and being clunky and awkward. Maybe one day I might finish this but it won't be any time soon.