I really wanted to love this. I love a locked room mystery, particularly one when people are on vacation. I enjoyed the storytelling but there was wayyyy too much detail in some scenes and then entire other scenes were skipped over.
The piece that bugged me the most: why in the world was Ro allowed to be so involved in the investigation??
I liked the relationship-building between Josie and Will, but I struggled with the MC ages. No way is a 28 year old a successful CEO for a popular clothing brand.
Also, everyone owns their own house, her BFF's fiance is just going to open a new restaurant in NYC... I get she comes from money but it was hard to believe.
Additionally the drama from the Forbes article made no sense. No one would care. No one knows anything about clothing CEOs. And GASP a start-up is difficult to work at? Eh.
But still, I liked it.
I just don't believe any of this. I don't need all my books to be believable, but some details are just so silly.
Alex is in her 20s and she gets a prestigious job replacing a beloved columnist with no journalism experience?
She makes $125k in NYC for said prestigious job with no relevant experience and has a personal assistant* and a private office at a newspaper?! And if my memory is correct, she has to write ONE column a week.
She has no friends or support group, oh wait, except for that eccentric group of friends she sees daily at a diner in NYC.
This was a cozy mystery when I expected a thriller and I'm a little annoyed.
This wasn't for me. I love all of Alison Cochrun's other books so I expected to love this one too.
Logan and Rosemary both bugged me (they were caricatures) and frankly the book had too many references to butts, diapers, being smelly, and sweatiness for my liking.
We kept being told how the main characters feel (or felt) but it felt like we never saw it.
A few disparate thoughts.
- it took me awhile to get into Better Left Unsent
- once I tucked in and just enjoyed the cozy story, I loved it
-the writing reminds me of Mhari McFarlane (love her!)
- the side characters and surrounding story to the MC are fantastic, like all Lia Louis books
- I think I'll enjoy a re-read a lot, now that I know what to expect
Hm. 4 stars is higher than this deserves but I was along for the ride. Most of the book felt like a story of a bunch of busy bodies just sticking their noses in other people's business.
The epilogue wrapped everything up but I wish it had been woven into the story along the way instead of a “tada! Here's what actually happened!”