Rebecca
It felt like fanfiction but poorly written fanfiction at that. Didn't care about the people the plot; which only seemed to be-girl gets power and everyone wants to get girl's power for themselves or kill her...meh.
Plus the boy meets girl and they instantly fall in love at first sight and bang right away...(there is fade to black so no spice but still.) Characters; cardboard, Plot; paper, Setting; fits world at least, Dialogue; WTF?.The whole thing just makes me sad and wish it was better.
It felt like fanfiction but poorly written fanfiction at that. Didn't care about the people the plot; which only seemed to be-girl gets power and everyone wants to get girl's power for themselves or kill her...meh.
Plus the boy meets girl and they instantly fall in love at first sight and bang right away...(there is fade to black so no spice but still.) Characters; cardboard, Plot; paper, Setting; fits world at least, Dialogue; WTF?.The whole thing just makes me sad and wish it was better.