

Honestly I didn't get past the first chapter. It's a writing style I'm not a fan of: everything's in passive voice and there's no rhyme or humour to it. Stylistically very Boomer Writing An All Staff Email, I don't dig it.
Honestly I didn't get past the first chapter. It's a writing style I'm not a fan of: everything's in passive voice and there's no rhyme or humour to it. Stylistically very Boomer Writing An All Staff Email, I don't dig it.

Interesting premise, but the story felt flat. There was no buildup, no tension, no real consequence. It felt a bit like a comedy of errors without the comedy. Kinda bleak.
Interesting premise, but the story felt flat. There was no buildup, no tension, no real consequence. It felt a bit like a comedy of errors without the comedy. Kinda bleak.

The premise is basically what if the universe is a computer with speculative execution bugs. If you understand that sentence, it's probably going to be irritatingly slow and repetitive for you.
I liked the idea but I felt it was poorly written. They were sentences that literally did not make sense. A bunch of exposition I ended up just skimmimg over. A narrative that didn't really gel with me, and a bunch of points where I was just confused what was happening.
It's a fun idea, the concepts are interesting, the relationships could have been something, but it just didn't go anywhere because everything was so black and white. The stakes didn't feel like stakes because the protagonists are too competent and everything solved by magic. And none of the plot points seemed to amount for anything? The car bombs? The conjuring of food? The magic system? It was all just a sidebar to the actual plot, which didn't go anywhere. I dunno, I wanted to like it but I think the reviews were about right.
The premise is basically what if the universe is a computer with speculative execution bugs. If you understand that sentence, it's probably going to be irritatingly slow and repetitive for you.
I liked the idea but I felt it was poorly written. They were sentences that literally did not make sense. A bunch of exposition I ended up just skimmimg over. A narrative that didn't really gel with me, and a bunch of points where I was just confused what was happening.
It's a fun idea, the concepts are interesting, the relationships could have been something, but it just didn't go anywhere because everything was so black and white. The stakes didn't feel like stakes because the protagonists are too competent and everything solved by magic. And none of the plot points seemed to amount for anything? The car bombs? The conjuring of food? The magic system? It was all just a sidebar to the actual plot, which didn't go anywhere. I dunno, I wanted to like it but I think the reviews were about right.

This was fine enough, but very long and the council library only let me have it for a week at a time so I had to cram it in. The end was satisfying if a little straightforward, but overall it did tend to drag. I think I'm just not into a period piece.
This was fine enough, but very long and the council library only let me have it for a week at a time so I had to cram it in. The end was satisfying if a little straightforward, but overall it did tend to drag. I think I'm just not into a period piece.