Bryce
Overall writing was better this book but holy shit the belaboring absolutely wrecks the pacing. Author gotta set a limit on how many times they rehash the same damn thing like ffs bro. These books honestly need to do indexes and links so that if someone forgets who someone is or what an ability is and wants to know they just click the link and don't have to suffer through another power or backstory rehash.
Overall writing was better this book but holy shit the belaboring absolutely wrecks the pacing. Author gotta set a limit on how many times they rehash the same damn thing like ffs bro. These books honestly need to do indexes and links so that if someone forgets who someone is or what an ability is and wants to know they just click the link and don't have to suffer through another power or backstory rehash.