Zarskey
I really enjoyed the overall concept and plot. Some of the writing is frustrating just because of sentence structure since there were a lot of short, interrupted sentences so it feels like reading in staccato. I felt like the motivations and emotional aspects of the characters felt a little flat and not fully realized sometimes. There's also not as big of an emotional closure/payoff at the end as I would've liked (Phosyne *my manic baby girl* deserves to be kissed and held IM NOT SORRY) I did also enjoy the rotating POVs with every chapter so there's that. I saw someone somewhere say this wasn't gay enough and I agree!
I really enjoyed the overall concept and plot. Some of the writing is frustrating just because of sentence structure since there were a lot of short, interrupted sentences so it feels like reading in staccato. I felt like the motivations and emotional aspects of the characters felt a little flat and not fully realized sometimes. There's also not as big of an emotional closure/payoff at the end as I would've liked (Phosyne *my manic baby girl* deserves to be kissed and held IM NOT SORRY) I did also enjoy the rotating POVs with every chapter so there's that. I saw someone somewhere say this wasn't gay enough and I agree!