It probably deserved two stars, since the monster isn't bad and there are a few decent story elements.
But it doesn't know what to do with its far too many characters, and not much actually happens.
Really, though, I deducted a star for the description of flashes of memory as “Snapchats of memory” and for the part where they talk about Ghostbusters, but it's the awful remake.
A reluctant three stars.
Three complaints:
1. Lack of motivation for one dramatic moment ... which was unfortunately the climax
2. One dramatic moment glossed over for no reason
3. Two parts where Shirley seemed as if he lost track of what was happening
But I like the world and the characters and the wackiness of working game mechanics into a coherent story. There's no point in applying too much critical thinking to this one.
This is written by from the perspective of someone who has achieved a level of enlightenment, by someone who clearly hasn't. What it amounts to is a guy who hates his former self, but hasn't seemed to learn about life ... just addiction ... from that self.
There are some great stories about stand ups and the business in here, and some nice movie talk, nestled in among judgey, go-nowhere assertions that his current self is where it's at.
I wonder how the book would read if he'd made less money or hadn't had a kid.
This is among the worst Piers Anthony novels I've read. His usually troubling sex scenes are here, plus a lot of non-pun humor, which is not something he's good at.
I feel like he might've been imitating Norman Spinrad a bit, here. Whatever he was going for with this more bombastic tone, it was a swing and a miss.
I'm thrown off by the ending and am tempted to accuse the book of being misogynistic.
I think it probably isn't really and is just too slight a work for the nuance that would save it.
I could be wrong. I finished it only moments ago, and it is at least rich enough to get me thinking about its themes. I may come back later and give it an additional star.
From the way he skirts around the issues or only drops in an occasional brief mention of them, it's almost as if Abbott is aware that he utterly fails to apply his own Constitutionalist principles to issues like religion in the public sphere or abortion.
This abject hypocrisy aside, his ideas about the Constitution and the states' ability to amend it are all pretty sound, and most of the proposals in here make sense or are at least intriguing.
The book was a little repetitive, but I guess that makes sense for a manifesto like this.