Kitty
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Kitty
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Part one and two of this book are great. Well researched, too. The third part is drawn out and boring and not convincing. The problem hinges on the plot. There is no way to make that really work in the end so she needs a sort of magical solution. It’s a first novel though. Hopefully she gets better editors for her next book.
Part one and two of this book are great. Well researched, too. The third part is drawn out and boring and not convincing. The problem hinges on the plot. There is no way to make that really work in the end so she needs a sort of magical solution. It’s a first novel though. Hopefully she gets better editors for her next book.