I wanted to like this, I really did, but it was just ok. The characters didn't feel distinct or real. For instance, Valerie shifted over the course of a day or two from distrusting Athena and viewing her with slight contempt to complete faith in her and treating her like a trusted officer. I mean.. that's just not a realistic character arc. So, it was an interesting story idea, but the writing just didn't draw me in.
I felt like this book was... ok. There's nothing wrong with it. But there's nothing about it that particularly stands out from the crowd either. It felt very much like a run-of-the-mill ya/fantasy book. The world building felt a bit flat, and I didn't really understand some of the motivations of the characters, or why they chose certain actions. Everyone beyond the main character felt extremely 1-dimensional, and even she felt flat as well.
I've liked other Amy Tintera books, so I'm going to give the sequel a try and hope it's just the author hitting her stride in a new series.
The main character Hiro really did feel like Mary Sue (the constant saying that he's the greatest swordsman in the world, which is totally irrelevant, etc) but despite that, I LOVED this book. The idea of an ancient Sumerian proto-language that allows for linguistic bio-hacking of brains? Sign me up.
Definitely requires some suspension of disbelief regarding the genetic science part (which is left deliberately vague, and that's probably for the best) and you need to buy into the premise that there's one specific person who is your best fit; but as long as you can get past that, it's an interesting read. How would society actually change if you could be matched to one specific person? And how would different people handle the knowledge? A fun read.
This book was ok. That's about the extent of how I felt about it. It had all the right fantasy elements, but for some reason, it just never really came together for me. I feel like that's probably just my experience, and I think plenty of other people will like this book just fine; there's nothing really WRONG with this book. I just didn't feel drawn in by the characters.