Marlobo

Loved the story, the characters, Marco as Ash's alter ego, and the dry style. And the humor (oh my gosh, it was midnight and I was all LMAO)

Yet, the editing is atrocious, if not non-existent: repeated paragraphs, missing sections or pages. At least twice, when turning a page, I found the ending of a word followed by a paragraph completely unrelated to what had been said before. Yes, I checked locations to make sure I hadn't missed something, but it still made no sense. There were also some other inconsistencies as well.

I doubt the book even had a proofread. It detracts one and a half stars from my rating.

3.5 stars

I don't fully buy the premise of the breakup 15 years ago, but I enjoyed the rest of the story, especially the focus on the players' wellness and the documentary filming aspect. Furthermore, I would say I connected more with those aspects than with the relationship between Sandro & Bennett.

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3.5 stars

2.5 stars