Brian
16 Reads
Interesting premise, but tedious execution. Every other chapter jumps back in time which breaks any narrative urgency. The heroine is the best fighter ever, a brilliant sleuth, a penniless orphan. She doesn't feel like a real person.
The setting is interesting though, and I almost care about several of the characters.
Interesting premise, but tedious execution. Every other chapter jumps back in time which breaks any narrative urgency. The heroine is the best fighter ever, a brilliant sleuth, a penniless orphan. She doesn't feel like a real person.
The setting is interesting though, and I almost care about several of the characters.