This turned out really great, but it threw me off with what seemed like information vomit. Seemed like it sort of jumped around in a way that was hard to WANT to follow. It go better though
Vulgar
Tits. Cock. Fuck. Pussy. Dick.... yeah... I am good. I don't like reading things with possession and pretty much sexual assault that is tried to be made sexy. Not my flavor. Thanks anyway
I have always been a fan and enjoyed this book as much as others. It was really great! I laughed and felt it was fun.
A few bits bothered me. Timing, consistency and such. Very tiny things with the villian and POV's. Sometimes it seemed like she forgot whose POV it was or would just start a POV of a different character randomly who never had one before.
Not anything that bothered me too much, but I just really noticed. ALSO, how she constantly talked about the body of the FL. Her breasts straining against her shirt, her bouncy breast and so forth... and dude... these bitches be pale. Creamy white skin. All of them. Creamy white.