Lotta
62 Reads
Writing is good and story is interesting, but it is too detailed. I am happy the character knows stuff - I don't have to know everything they do. Also I feel like there is a lot of filler text that doesn't serve to the story or characters.
It is also very slow paced, the story picked up only in the final chapters.
Writing is good and story is interesting, but it is too detailed. I am happy the character knows stuff - I don't have to know everything they do. Also I feel like there is a lot of filler text that doesn't serve to the story or characters.
It is also very slow paced, the story picked up only in the final chapters.