Sarah
I wish this was edited down more. I like the premise but there was so much in the book that felt completely unnecessary. A round of editing could have given it a crisper story. It also felt heavy so it was just a bit of a slog to get through. I would have DNFed but I was reading for a book club. It finally picked up about 75% of the way through. The end was abrupt, which was surprising considering how rambling the rest of the book was.
I wish this was edited down more. I like the premise but there was so much in the book that felt completely unnecessary. A round of editing could have given it a crisper story. It also felt heavy so it was just a bit of a slog to get through. I would have DNFed but I was reading for a book club. It finally picked up about 75% of the way through. The end was abrupt, which was surprising considering how rambling the rest of the book was.