Boris Krischel
I just found it overly complicated. The story makes no sense, since no normal person would ever take part in a plan like the one devised in this story. The whole concept is ridiculous. How are you supposed to figure out why anything is happening if the characters' decisions are stupid? If the characters' reasoning made more sense, I could support it more; it is cleverly put together. However, the motivation at the end, which is supposed to justify everything, is not good enough for me.
I just found it overly complicated. The story makes no sense, since no normal person would ever take part in a plan like the one devised in this story. The whole concept is ridiculous. How are you supposed to figure out why anything is happening if the characters' decisions are stupid? If the characters' reasoning made more sense, I could support it more; it is cleverly put together. However, the motivation at the end, which is supposed to justify everything, is not good enough for me.