Gg

It was OK.
Btw that weiner dog was an example of why the rule “show, don't tell” is told to writers.

What?! I feel cheated, If it was ever was a poly couple this was it. Ezra-Declan-Felix

Details that make me an insomniac: Does Declan get the Brown Scholarship?
Does hacking works tha way?

I guess that if I got feels about a story, its a good one. I cryed and laughed while living this one.
Wanted to slap people around, included Ezra, but I guess it's YA and adolescent people get a pass on grandiose stupid shit.

Bland as f*ck. So utterly unmemorable.
This novel had that thing some authors do in wich when there is something happening or a dialogue, they drop in the middle of the conversation/action to have a 3 paragraph description of something, preferably the gushing look of the male protag or the mind ramblings of the girl. Then continue as nohing happens. It makes me crazy. It makes me want to reread some Ilona Andrews, where action is action, dialogue is dialogue and descriptions are sprinkled along but moderately.
Also: Why does everybody have to be pregnant to be a HEA

Confort food.

Utter rubbish
I remember liking her Eidolon books, so decided to give this a try. Literally I just sighed in real life.

The worst offenders in this:
Cunnus
This word was introduced in the middle of a list of sexual things so when I first read it I assumed it implied some kind of annal sex, see evidence A "Images of him taking her in a myriad of ways, his cock sliding into her mouth, her cunnus, between her buttocks. " Cunnus is totally the love son of cunt and annus and nobody can't deny it. It means vagina, the author really reaaally didn't want to write vagina so this is the chosen word.
Maybe it's just me and I skipped that development stage in wich you search dirty words in a thesaurus and proceed to giggle ankwardly, but then, english is not my first language.

Power structure of the relashionship m/f
Martise is a slave in 98% of the book. Silhara didn't treat her like one at the start of the romantic relashionship but that doesn't make her a free woman since he is his Master. Also at the first hint of problems, instead of talking, he reverts to enforce this imbalance in power, asking her to call him master and being assholish again.

Unmemorability of the characters
In two weeks I'm not going to remember Marise or Silhara, maybe Gurn the mute helper since he was more interesting. I just didn't care much for them while I was reading, and everytime somebody remarked that the dog smelled bad I was just thinking when are they going to bathe him? Poor hound! You irresponsible pet owners. Spoiler alert Nobody washed the dog.
The thinks I liked: The oranges, the lych scenes, the demon dog.