Very good piece. It was easy for me to identify with the protagonist, and I appreciate that. I can see the story as an extended metaphor for depression, or a commentary on the awfulness of ordinary life. But I also like the idea that something did happen to the protagonist or to the world.

Wow, a wlw story! Nice, I wasn't expecting that. It's a very heavy-handed metaphor for a bad relationship, but I feel it works well.

This is mpreg presented as horror, basically. I see behind the curtain, which the whole story has been building up as something terrifying, and it's a very common romance trope.

I really liked this short story, because it surprised me more than once. I'm not a genre-savvy horror reader, but I thought I knew the kind of story it was, and I was mistaken, and then mistaken again. Another that I'll be keeping in mind.