Ryan Hannebaum

Quite simply the greatest fictional novel ever written.

Unique concept in need of a conclusion

It's Neal Stephenson, so of course the idea is novel and intriguing.... though I do tire somewhat of the infinite multiverse theory. It's a little too deus ex machina for my taste. But this narrative suffers in the end from the lack of resolution. It's like the narrator ran out of ink instead of the story running its full course.

I'll be honest: I don't understand the rave reviews for this one. The ending was so anticlimactic that I'm not sure I can, in good conscience, call it an “ending” at all. The pacing was rushed; the characters archetypical; the story all too predictable.Obviously you know Cain isn't the murderer. The author is way too heavy-handed in trying to prop up Joe Brady as an alternative theory in readers' minds. And he's also too forceful in trying to get the reader to loathe Suzanne. That really only leaves you with two options in your head (due to the complete lack of characters and their development): Claire and Jane.You know it isn't going to be Claire, since she's set up so blatantly (noticing a pattern here?) as Cain's only ally and eventual love interest. Oh, and not to mention the fact that she has no motive.That leaves only Jane.And that's without the hilariously out-of-place-unless-it-serves-as-a-clear-motive side plot of Jane prepping a run for Congress.Woof. Brad Smith should be glad I've read [a:James Patterson 3780 James Patterson https://images.gr-assets.com/authors/1468347205p2/3780.jpg], so I know what a true one-star book looks like—[b:The Jester 13157 The Jester James Patterson https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1347270829s/13157.jpg 2513115], anyone?—as that's about the only reason for the second star here.

A great read for any aspiring storytellers.

Enough detail to hold interest, enough skimming to keep the pace up

I enjoyed the middle ground this book plays in. It would never be mistaken for a Neal Stephenson book with regard to scientific exploration, but there was enough meat to it to keep it believable all the same. Writing a snarky female protagonist can't be easy for a male author, either.

This was sort of like a Harlen Coben novel set on the moon.